I am a Year 8 student at Ahipara School in Northland, NZ. I am in Room 3 and my teacher is Mrs Takimoana.
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Tuesday, December 3, 2019
Sunday, November 17, 2019
Sunday, November 3, 2019
Tuesday, June 11, 2019
Monday, May 13, 2019
Tuesday, May 7, 2019
Compound and Simple Sentences
So for our writing work lately, our class has been working on simple and compound sentences. We had to write a 20 sentence including those sentences. I hope you enjoy.
Wednesday, April 3, 2019
Lisa gets lost 2- Animation
Lately, for writing in class, we have made fun narrative animations. Mine is a sequel to my original 'Lisa gets lost'. I hope you enjoy my animation!
Wednesday, October 17, 2018
Play
Last term we had to write a play. You might find it a bit confusing but I hope you like it.
The bad babysitter
Mrs Pattercat
Mr. Pattercat
Baby Patercat
Babysitter
Robberdog
Supercat
Opening scene: Mrs. and Mr. Pattercat are by the door getting ready to leave the living room/scene. Babysitter and Baby Pattercat are sitting on chairs
Mrs. Pattercat: (handing Baby Pattercat to the Babysitter). Thank you for looking after my Pattercat, she needs to be in bed by 6:30pm. We will be back at 8ish.
Mr. Pattercat: (looking worried at Babysitter). Just so you know, my baby has been getting stolen lately, so be careful.
Babysitter: (smiling). Yes. If I don’t lose her I get paid double right?
Mr. Pattercat: (sighing). Yes, yes okay. I am rich anyway. (Turns to walk out the door). See you in 3 hours.
Mrs. Pattercat: (looking sadly at Baby Pattercat). Bye, my baby. Goodbye, I LOVE YOU! (Follows Mr Pattercat).
Mr. and Mrs. Pattercat leave the scene, babysitter puts down Baby Pattercat down on the seat and sits on the other and pulls out her/his phone and dials numbers onto the phone
Babysitter: Hey Paisley (pause). I'm babysitting that rich Pattercat kid (pause). Yes they are rich, I get $400 an hour and double that if she doesn't get stolen (pause). I know right so much (pause). Oh you have to go, okay bye.
Babysitter hangs up the phone and Baby Pattercat drifts off asleep
Babysitter: (sighing) Huff, I’m bored, maybe I should go to sleep (pause). Yeah I could put on an alarm so I can wake before Pattercat parents come home (pause). ah, I am a genius
Babysitter falls asleep on the chair and Robber dog sneaks in a go towards Baby Pattercat
Robber dog: (looking around) Yus they are asleep. Now I can get Baby Pattercat and take over the world.
Robber dog looks over a babysitter
Robber dog: (whispering) Ha, and because YOU are asleep everything is even easier than be-
Super cat come in the scene with super duper pooper banaenae gun
Super cat: (heroically) Stop you idiotic fool (points gun at Robber dog) Or I’ll shoot you with my SUPER DUPER POOPER BANAENAE GUN!
Robber dog: (screaming) AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! PLEASE DON’T SHOOT ME!!! AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! I DON’T WANT TO DIE!!!! I’ll LEAVE YOU ALONE PLEASSSSEEEE!!
Super cat: Okay, but first crawl around the floor like a baby.
Robber dog: (looking at Super cat angrily) Nah. Never. Ever.
Super cat: I’ll shoot.
Robber dog: (scared) AAAAHHHHHHH!!! Fine I will, just don’t shoot me!!!
Robber dog on the ground crawling like a baby for 5 seconds
Super cat and Baby Pattercat: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Super cat: Wait! Your awake?!?
Baby Pattercat: (baby voice) Yes I am. I’m waiting for mummy and daddy to come home to tell how horrible the babysitter was.
Super cat: Oh (looks around). Well they are here now.
The door opens and Mrs. and Mr. Pattercat walks in
Mrs. Pattercat: (confused) WHAT HAPPENED HERE!?!?!?!
Super cat: Um… Bye now.
Super cat runs out with the babysitter and Robber dog runs out behind
Mr. Pattercat: (angrily) Do YOU know what happened?
Baby Pattercar: Um… I think Super Cat needs me.
Baby Pattercat runs out to Super Cat
Mr. Pattercat and Mrs. Pattercat: (yelling) WHAT THE HECK!!
Mr and Mrs Pattercat walk out cross.
BY KYAH REED
The bad babysitter
Mrs Pattercat
Mr. Pattercat
Baby Patercat
Babysitter
Robberdog
Supercat
Opening scene: Mrs. and Mr. Pattercat are by the door getting ready to leave the living room/scene. Babysitter and Baby Pattercat are sitting on chairs
Mrs. Pattercat: (handing Baby Pattercat to the Babysitter). Thank you for looking after my Pattercat, she needs to be in bed by 6:30pm. We will be back at 8ish.
Mr. Pattercat: (looking worried at Babysitter). Just so you know, my baby has been getting stolen lately, so be careful.
Babysitter: (smiling). Yes. If I don’t lose her I get paid double right?
Mr. Pattercat: (sighing). Yes, yes okay. I am rich anyway. (Turns to walk out the door). See you in 3 hours.
Mrs. Pattercat: (looking sadly at Baby Pattercat). Bye, my baby. Goodbye, I LOVE YOU! (Follows Mr Pattercat).
Mr. and Mrs. Pattercat leave the scene, babysitter puts down Baby Pattercat down on the seat and sits on the other and pulls out her/his phone and dials numbers onto the phone
Babysitter: Hey Paisley (pause). I'm babysitting that rich Pattercat kid (pause). Yes they are rich, I get $400 an hour and double that if she doesn't get stolen (pause). I know right so much (pause). Oh you have to go, okay bye.
Babysitter hangs up the phone and Baby Pattercat drifts off asleep
Babysitter: (sighing) Huff, I’m bored, maybe I should go to sleep (pause). Yeah I could put on an alarm so I can wake before Pattercat parents come home (pause). ah, I am a genius
Babysitter falls asleep on the chair and Robber dog sneaks in a go towards Baby Pattercat
Robber dog: (looking around) Yus they are asleep. Now I can get Baby Pattercat and take over the world.
Robber dog looks over a babysitter
Robber dog: (whispering) Ha, and because YOU are asleep everything is even easier than be-
Super cat come in the scene with super duper pooper banaenae gun
Super cat: (heroically) Stop you idiotic fool (points gun at Robber dog) Or I’ll shoot you with my SUPER DUPER POOPER BANAENAE GUN!
Robber dog: (screaming) AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! PLEASE DON’T SHOOT ME!!! AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! I DON’T WANT TO DIE!!!! I’ll LEAVE YOU ALONE PLEASSSSEEEE!!
Super cat: Okay, but first crawl around the floor like a baby.
Robber dog: (looking at Super cat angrily) Nah. Never. Ever.
Super cat: I’ll shoot.
Robber dog: (scared) AAAAHHHHHHH!!! Fine I will, just don’t shoot me!!!
Robber dog on the ground crawling like a baby for 5 seconds
Super cat and Baby Pattercat: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Super cat: Wait! Your awake?!?
Baby Pattercat: (baby voice) Yes I am. I’m waiting for mummy and daddy to come home to tell how horrible the babysitter was.
Super cat: Oh (looks around). Well they are here now.
The door opens and Mrs. and Mr. Pattercat walks in
Mrs. Pattercat: (confused) WHAT HAPPENED HERE!?!?!?!
Super cat: Um… Bye now.
Super cat runs out with the babysitter and Robber dog runs out behind
Mr. Pattercat: (angrily) Do YOU know what happened?
Baby Pattercar: Um… I think Super Cat needs me.
Baby Pattercat runs out to Super Cat
Mr. Pattercat and Mrs. Pattercat: (yelling) WHAT THE HECK!!
Mr and Mrs Pattercat walk out cross.
BY KYAH REED
Sunday, August 19, 2018
Narrative Storybook: Eating Mr Wolf
In term 2 we had to write a narrative storybook for 5 to 8-year-olds. I enjoyed writing this story because I got to be creative and funny - no one could stop my imagination! And when I shared it with 3 five-year-olds they were scared. (That was not my intention!!)
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